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Old 01-02-04, 08:08 PM   #14
GaZeeBo
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From: Bronx NY
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alright here is the breakdown

METERS

illiterate bitch, how ya plan to hit me when ya can't hit the books?,
Ya shitty rhymes ditch class so I school ya with a tirade of hooks!,

nice punch-7/10

Fight back? your so wack ya can't even throw a tight fisted punch,
I'ma leprauchan the way ya shit out of luck and i ate ya for lunch!,

umm i think this was ok 7/10

Ya pass-a-fist so ya can't fight back as I mark ya skull wit bruises,
Bitch thinks its impressive when he battles herbs an never loses

HOTT 8/10

Don't make excuses, bein the cream of the crap don't make ya ill,
Stupid fag, spellin ya name CannabarZ dont mean you have s-kill,

HOTT 8/10

I'll scar ya face so Tonya Montana'll flee from Cannabarz in haste,
I WISH that cokehead was here, then ya wack lines'd be erased!,

BEst line u had 9/10

Ya record means shit to me herb, this victory will be a clean sweep,
Afta i use ya skull as a broom, your skeleton'll hang in my cloest by da feet!

also hott 7/10

OVERALL-46/60

nice job good punches and personals
also multis were ok

CANNABARZ

Meters Text-stopping..When it's veterans your internet-hopping..
Intell I puncture your lungs, like the ones you see on cigerette boxes!..

nice bar-8/10

An it's obvious, you adobted my style without document papers..
That's biting! an your red-handed like Rouge Lipstick makers!..

didnt like as much but still an ok bar - 7/10

Your a stalker homey, an Meters proved he throats the worst..
guy had a web-camera in my house, before he wrote-his-verse!..

hahaha hott verse-8/10

Yours flows-in-a-hearse, so Actually, let's just compare are flows..
Your not a winner, Meter..Just cuz you shop-there for clothes

also hott very nice bar-8/10

Nut Hugging C.Quip and Cannabarz, their surroundin are pose..
So fuck it..heres some dirt, It can match the brown on your nose

didnt like as much-7/10

Poundin this hoe, Oh it's quiet easy when his text isn't great..
breaking Meters is nothing like Heavy men checkin-their-weight!..

hott closer good bar 9/10

OVERALL- 47/60

WHAT A FUCKIN BATTLE that was great to read and to vote on

my vote goes to cannabarz because of punches and better vocabulary

very good battle
u should do it again sometimes

yo hit this up with an honest vote- both of u guys dont hate

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103305

i took the time on this one because it was a good battle

please return the favor with a good vote on this one