Thread: the devil in me
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Old 01-02-04, 08:23 PM   #6
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Yeah this was alright i thought.....your structure could use some work though i think, some of your lines were kinda long, just watch that but it was still good.....it flowed pretty well i thought too, it stayed on through out the piece....overall a alright piece...keep at it.
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