freakjay verse

When I spit my lyrics, It's like spitting gold, they got the power to make yours go cold, yo on the microphone i get spitting so fast you'll be standing there watching me trying to keep up while having a heart attack, yeah i crazy on the mic when you spit you make everybody feel lazy. you fucking homo don't take your anger out on me because i fucked your old lady, so the next time you wanna battle me son remember yer not gonna win i second ta none

not bad but try to work on your structure no flow no pounches pulled that would hurt...no personals

cannabars verse

this kid is ridiculous..when it his text
with a stretched shit..
emmit smith could kick a 7th inning stretch
No elevation, waiting for metaphor bars'
but the pussy ain't goin blow..
like puttin a gun w/ empty bullets in pornstars!
your no har', your text final chapters r wack,
so u need to back off, like chiropractors on wax!
past-experiences, nah..this newbie jus startin
pissed on my flowers,
n this herb just grew from a garden!
this dude is jus starvin, plus i got the skills
freakyjay ain't headin up like seniors w/ viagra pills!

better verse but expected more
better overall harder pounches
better structure and flow but could use work
better metas

overall vote goes to cannabars for better category

vote my battles in sig peace