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Old 01-02-04, 09:42 PM   #8
Eki
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yeh not bat of a battle.

Black lizzard came good. Oright punches. But whats with the italics man? You trying to make it harder to read?

Anyway i feel Crooked took this just . With better punches, better flow and structure. But not much in it

please return the fev and vote honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101043