----meters verse--------

illiterate bitch, how ya plan to hit me when ya can't hit the books?,
Ya shitty rhymes ditch class so I school ya with a tirade of hooks!,
Fight back? your so wack ya can't even throw a tight fisted punch,
I'ma leprauchan the way ya shit out of luck and i ate ya for lunch!,
Ya pass-a-fist so ya can't fight back as I mark ya skull wit bruises,
Bitch thinks its impressive when he battles herbs an never loses!,
Don't make excuses, bein the cream of the crap don't make ya ill,
Stupid fag, spellin ya name CannabarZ dont mean you have s-kill,
I'll scar ya face so Tonya Montana'll flee from Cannabarz in haste,
I WISH that cokehead was here, then ya wack lines'd be erased!,
Ya record means shit to me herb, this victory will be a clean sweep,
Afta i use ya skull as a broom, your skeleton'll hang in my cloest by da feet!
--vote down--
alote of stronge pounches some good personals used alote of wordplay and metas overall a very good tight verse....you also take the structre your flow flowed jus right

---cannabars verse-----

Meters Text-stopping..When it's veterans your internet-hopping..
Intell I puncture your lungs, like the ones you see on cigerette boxes!..
An it's obvious, you adobted my style without document papers..
That's biting! an your red-handed like Rouge Lipstick makers!..
Your a stalker homey, an Meters proved he throats the worst..
guy had a web-camera in my house, before he wrote-his-verse!..
Yours flows-in-a-hearse, so Actually, let's just compare are flows..
Your not a winner, Meter..Just cuz you shop-there for clothes!
Nut Hugging C.Quip and Cannabarz, their surroundin are pose..
So fuck it..heres some dirt, It can match the brown on your nose!
Poundin this hoe, Oh it's quiet easy when his text isn't great..
breaking Meters is nothing like Heavy men checkin-their-weight!..

-----vote down---
honestly very good verse but personaly i didn't feel any pounches or personals i did find alote of word play and creativty
-----------------------my vote Meters---------------
for better and harder pounches
better structre and flow
better metas and wordplay

no hate jus a vote

peace

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