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Old 01-03-04, 12:14 AM   #10
TRIBAL
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----------DZ verse------------



your wack battlin wit me
i could kill you but then there would be no bitches left
holes threw ya chest are commin
if u saw me i would have u gone right runnin
wud up fag...herb..homo
my name aint mark so bitch u best know
ima kill yo...wit a u at the end
make a u turn cuz you aint my friend
your a fag...just gotta let u know
hope u die...homo

very weak battle verse there was the word fag used to many times that is really played out dawg stop it


---------------------212-------------

this kid is so wack he rhymed left wit me
just like my other opponents..dumb fuck G's
i aint even gotta try...^ i just killed u wit that
Now we all know that bitch aint commin back
Fo' real though..i didnt wanna have to do this
But ya had to call me out and now u lossing
I wish i didnt have to come to this..but it did
There is -1 herb in da world......
.......to smoke theres less shit!
Fucka DZ...DoZing off is what the voters be
Ya Name is correct, ya my Neux murk for me

------------vote----------
better pounches wordplay
better structure flow
better personal

-------my vote--------------
212

peace