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Quoted from LyricalJedi
What the fuck this nigga calls himself reflektionz
that spelling needs some correction
nigga you wack even if you don't think so
I drop mothafuckas like plinko
Nigga you die like Brandon Lee in the crow
so nigga give me the crown
Fuck it I shooting your blackhawk down you fuckin clown
This nigga smoking shit that fuck up his brain
battling me is like going out like Kurt covain
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LMFAO...*SMH*
Ok that was disgracful..
Ya need help on ya
Flow, Structure, Punches, Personals,
EVERYTHING....
Overall....2/20
No hate.. just keepin it real
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Quoted from Reflektionz
This Jedi is in stored for battles scars that hit an kill newbs..
your outa barz .this aint star warz but let the force be wit u..
im instituting a beating on the weak that cant spit a sentence
my new years revolution was to drill mc's like i was the dentist..
im teachin a lesson.fuk a lyrical obeewakanobee wannabe..
honestly kid u thought ya mind wudnt start wondering..
threw sites lookin to copy an past pondering to leagues..
hopin to find an bite a verse that got punches up there sleeves..
I believe your 0-2 this wont be ya first W so ill leave speechless..
rap game just leave it.I aint playin like the disable at recess..
only time u spittin is when u sneeze bitch so regardless.
i new u was wak since day one.your just a starving artist..
takin hard hits from a vet in a newb disguise ..
quick to dimize a plan to unleash the wrath of a legend/VEt
u heading for mayhem..even if u was osama u cudnt be sending threats..
bending necks wit my text.i dont no why u tryed comparing ILL..
my punches knockin this bitch out he fell out his dads computer chair..
get killed quick i spray slugs an spit till i fry the mic..
this battles over quicker then me hitting submit reply..
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hmmm...Thats better
Some good wordplay
Flow was pretty good
Structure was decent..needs a lil fixing
Punches hit nice an hard
Personals...not many
OVeral....15/20
Vote=Reflektionz
Simply cuz his punches hit harder
His verse was all out better than LyricalJedi's
Sorry Lyrical.. but ya need elevation.....
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