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Old 01-03-04, 12:54 AM   #15
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damn....Reflektionz pretty much ripped this kid pretty easy.....he had some nice punches.....good personals...and a few good metas.....Lyrical Jedi had a nice structure and flow though...here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Metas - Ref
Wordplay - Ref
Punches - Ref
Flow - Jedi
Personals - Ref (star wars line)
RhymeScheme - Ref
Structure - Jedi
Overall - Reflektionz takes this hands down just for having a better overall verse.....kinda sucks though cuz he spit like twice the amount of barz.....good read from u both...no hate...just a vote...

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