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Old 01-03-04, 01:15 AM   #11
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Young Cell -
Fuck an intro.. Get into it no one wants to hear you jabber.. Ok name disses.. Don't EVER DISS PLANET OF THE APES! The outro was mad stupid.. I'm so sick of the word "cell" right now.. You used way to many incarceration/cell lines.. 1 is enough

Ferris -
You have a way better flow.. Unfortunatley, calling someone a "Back packer wack rapper blah blah faggot ass motherfucker" doesn't constitute as a punch.. You sound more like a commercial rapper.. The end punch had no "ooomph".. The beat was ok even though it doesn't really matter lol.. You need to learn what an actual punch is.
"Fuckin you up like a 6 foot dick" <--- That is NOT a punch

Vote - Young Cell, knock out punch or whatever..
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