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Old 01-03-04, 01:22 AM   #6
Aisle Phive
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From: New Jersey
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Damn. . I'm impressed by the both of you. This was a dope battle. And I vote honestly, both of yall are my boys. Here's the breakdown. .


Feeble's Verse


Read Sig for maximum effect. .

. . read it, now!

battlin im known complete, u dont defeat, u wont compete. .
evolves nuts are a pothole.. thats why you own the streets
Dope. . 9/10
walter?. . skills are out of reach, & he can't afford to claim it
cuz battle wise i cover Walls like a mortgage payment. .
Good, 7/10
im ya lord just say it, u only get dr's but soon that cult'll fall
cuz im like home realtors. . i sell off everything walter wall . .
Wording was ehh, punch was aight. 6/10
under pressure im recalling he melts.. you'll fall & get dealt
tag team champ in my league? bitch im withdrawing ya belt
Nah. 5/10
face is crawling with welts, i saw ur sig & swelled with hatred
I moved onto Elite. .
its sad u gotta brag about being rated the best in elevated
Dope personal n punch. 9/10
this is hell's verbatim. . im in with the devil on claimin ya fate
discussed the pros.. proposals my dick, walter aims to debate
These lines are getting kind of played, the concept rather. decent line. 7/10
walters heads the target i came to deflate & i'll hurt this walt
fucked up so bad. .
. .after this battle only medal you'll win is the purple heart
Good. 8/10
walter they speak of u sayin, he's never gonna reach that high
but talkin of me they say.. this head will beat wall. . like that guy. .
You're getting kind of played with the name disses, this was good tho. 7/10
i'll expose this dickrider. . around feeble he's a horny kid. .
shit, he's voted for me in every round of this tournament!
Good personal. 8/10

Overall 68/90 = .755555555555555

Walters Verse

WHOA! Kyle’s not dope….vets tend to ignore
that his pedophilia intervention’s…………..
the only time he reaches the final 4!
Decent. 7/10
You whore! ……..
Here u can’t get dickridden by ure newbie brigade
RB goes with my flow, with ures….they just wade!
Nice, 8/10
Fuck’n Lame!..........
kinda like ure battle with cam…..ure gonna lose this
Changed name from Feeble to Enhance……
just to claim he made an improvement!
lol 8/10
Ure useless!……
So I’m a say things I cant take back & never regret it
It’s pathetic….
This matchups a broken sauna………I don’t sweat it!
Ight 7/10
Ure respected?.....
I’ve beaten you in text, topicals…everything u know
never touched a mic…..
Ill take my mic cord and strangle u…to beat u in audio!
Nice connection, dope personal. 9/10
Don’t ya know…..
Its a juvenile hall birthday! U have to watch me clown u
Embrace ure syndrome! so you can finally be down too!
HAHAHA dope! 10/10
It’s true…..
Feeble equal’s retard theres no doubt about it…take a medal
This battles got the same result…..
As if I gave him Kyle a knife and asked him who’s special!
Blah. . 5/10
I’ve got potential…..
And feebz is a cripple….even his words falter
Plus, he’s a pathological liar, LOOK!

quote:
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Originally posted by Feeble Minded
im going to beat you in LLL walter!
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Nah. . 6/10
You we’re way off……
Kenny’s not here….So Kyle’s on the chopping block tonight
Because…..
Feeble was known to come hard…..b4 I took away his enzyte!
Played a bit n decent punch. 6/10
That’s right!......
RB hates that u bit my style Kyle….how can I be wrong?
Go back to hav’n stretched lines...so you’ll finally belong!
Ok closer. . 7/10

Overall 73/100 = 73%

Overall this was a very dope battle, both of you came extremely good. A couple of played lines here and there, everything was close.

Feeble - You had a nice verse, everything was there. Nice personals and wordplay n punches. I liked it a lot. You kinda got a bit caught up dissing his name. But overall you verse was tight, and the punches hit very hard.

Walter - Nice showing from you as well, a lot of dope punches thrown. The complexity was far superior than Feeble. But, the only thing was your punches didn't hit as hard as Feebles. The wordplay was nice, the personals were good. But Feeble took personals and punches, and the wordplay was close. Also, the two or three words right after each bar to rhyme with the previous was quite unnessecary IMO. If you would have concentrated more on the punches instead of multis you would have had a better shot. But Feeble came harder than you, plain and simple.

Dope battle fellas, but my vote goes to Feeble here.
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