Damn dude, this was one of the best 'all around' peices I've read in quite a while. On a technical level there aint nothing much at all wrong with it whatsoever. I think this peice would make a great rap song too, maybe something along the lines of DMX's Trina Moe or something.

As for the content, that's some heavy shit. Y'know the number one reason for women to cheat on their significant other is to get revenge on them, but for men they cheat just for the sex? I dunno why I said that, but I just thought I'd throw that in there.

Is this stuff happening in real life? I mean, cheating is a seriously bad thing, and I can't condone it. Even if it happened to me. But it is a forgivable sin. To an extent.

I hope this year is better for you though.

~Islam~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.