8th

if i step up to flo/
u know the matters the same/
and if i pull out the deuce deuce/
its gonna scater ya brain/
plus i spit ryhmes so hard/
it will get ya boys to hate ya /
ur ryhmes....PLEASE!/
i used bettter shit for TOILET PAPER/
plus i know ur STYLE/
cause u stay VERSE writtin'/
but the only thing tight...is the shit u bytin/
imma call u lil TYSON/
ur style is lazy eyed/
my style will makes ur devil worshipin ass PRAISE TO GOD/
people call me lypo/
cause of the way i move weight/
but april 7th is the ony time this cat moves CAKE/ (peep his profile b-day)

the whole thing wasnt very good
work on ya struct, 2 of your lines should be 1
work on ya punches also



Verstyle
Please open ya text book and refer to refrained violence
You're so pathetic that critique's prefer to remain silent
I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit
And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit
Ya last heard sh1t's outdated kid ya better switch styles
It's no wonder I found ya name in Sacred Society's bitch files
Like a "one hit wonder" ya mad because ya know ya pitch less
This verse's a sure hit it's just a matter of which fist
Outcome of this battle's something ya wouldn't wannna see

Finisher:

I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB
Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie
Vainless acts of self praise through conscious humilty disgust me
Must be thick skinned to have the audacity to step on these grounds
Last time I checked "Mr.8th world", I highly doubt rap was a Clown
It's sad for a fresh face to stride into a grave where ashes lay
Your futures in shreads and sickeningly likened to that of Casius Clay
Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great
You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide your fate

structure was good, flowing almost perfect
had some good punches
wordplay was great

overall - Verstyle won this

keep battlin and elevate 8th