My bad on tha weak explanation. This battle was tough to get through, and it didn't REALLY have a lot of punches, so I DID give it a weak breakdown. I usually give a lot better explanations for the battlez that I vote on. Check if you'd like (Strobe).

Blazin':

So I'm battlin this cat that calls himself Free Yayo/
I'm bout to hand this guy his fifth fuckin Ko yo/
^ehh, ok open, not a strong personal: 4/10

Check it I'm fresha then that prince from the town of Belair/
Ya Skills are a myth like da witch named Blaire/
^This was a wack line: 3/10

You aint neva gimmie a scare like freddy crouger/
This verse will murda ya cuz metaphorically its a german rouger/
^Spelled out meta, but decent line (NOT the first line tho): 6/10

Tha only time you see a deal is on tuesday at KFC/
Kid ya heads more inflated then Pam Andersons tits on VIP/
^ok punch, but didn't really hit hard: 5/10

Now I know ya see me, up in the VIP booth/
Call me ya dental hygenist its painfull im rippin out cha tooth/
^ehh, weak line: 3/10

Tellin tha truth nobody cares how ya feel you aint neva gone make no deals/
Last time you was ridein big ya were 5 yrs old in ya power wheels/
^Deals, huh? 4/10

Yayo cd gets packed away more then Vin Deisel packin fudge/
I jus sentenced ya to your 5th lose now smile n say thank you judge/
^aight close, nothin' great tho: 5/10

Free:

blazin caucasion they should blaze you some caution
cuz u gonna run outta options and end up in that coffin/
^like tha multi's, decent opener: 6/10

I'm battlin' thiz wack fag even though I cant b bothered
I gotta be outta my mind, crazy, I think I lost it/
^umm, ok, sure: 5/10

just like u gonna loze thiz fucking battle
u'r handled man who carez about the shit u mample/
^-What tha FUCK iz "mample"?!?!: 4/10

u can count on losin' cuz my numbers do the shootin'
and the numbers are 187 dot45 6 as I'm used 2 it/
^decent line wit' tha explanation: 6/10

to close this thing, I'm gonna need a nice line to end this shit
I juzt like dissin' ya, u like snitchin' like 50 did on prince/
^first line was filler, second was a decent close: 6/10

SO:

Blazin': 30/70 = 42.8% (not) ill

Free: 27/50 = 54% (not REALLY) ill (either, but came stronger in this battle -if I can say that)

And here's my battle link. Hit this up wit' some input and an honest vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103166