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Old 01-03-04, 10:01 AM   #13
Spekta
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This battle was aight. Not the best verses I've seen, but I guess they'll work.

Payce, ya structure was on point, but you could have had better punches & snaps.

Reflektionz, your flow and rhymez were a lil' off, but wit' a rushed keystyle, it's understandable. You could have done a lot better on that tho.

PaYce:

The rhymes Im spittin at ya R, have ya confused n dazed
Have ya stuck on what to do here cuz u truly are a-mazed!
^No punches -filler for an opener: 4/10

Yea Im bitchin at ya verse...so call me the K-nine-nine
Cuz im krowned better than Saap at Defendin ya lines!
^ok meta: 5/10

takin ya pre-writtens, shovin em bak in ya face on paper
Dis here is ur Reflection bitch...A Big F for a Failure!
^no punches STILL: 4/10

Maybe I should just mail ya, Send ya somewhere close
So u can return to us soon and might drop a decent post!
^ok snap: 5/10

His verse been roast...even tho his meat was cheap
Mickey Dee's keystyle is the closest u'll ever get to beef!
^decent line -your best in the verse: 6/10

Think ur cool In ya profile talkin bout likin clits
But ya say u like to spit twice...So ya must love dicks!
^ok personal, but not a strong close: 5/10

Reflektionz:

Ya Verse is remotely mild,if u want To feel heat just wait..
cuz it dont matter wut kind of salsa u r..too me your just Payce.
^aight open, decent personal: 6/10

ya punches are fake plus your a bitch.but dont get but hurt.
Cuz there aint no need for me to feed off your verse..
^filler: 4/10

your teh worst mc ive seen.... u get dipped by chipz..
like nervous kids getting jack your abouta piss..
ya pants..so u mite as weel quit rappin cuz your that wak..
^ok lines, but no hard punches: 5/10

no need to get a 2 week notice cuz u werent,only as a fag..
^more filler

so homie id bounce the rap scene cuz u werent seen at all..
u didnt have skill.ya verse will back me up of that, so stop..
^decent line, umm, ehh personal: 5/10

cuz u aint raw.....u cudnt spit heat if u had a glock..
my spits knock..
unlike ya keystyles..wut made u think u were sick..
well u aint your a textee battler.on rb..an your 3-6
^ooh, nice punch, best line of tha battle: 7/10

u cud only find 3 newbs. wut a shame , your rap less..
watcha get slapped bitch cuz your complete wackness.
^decent line: 6/10

ill quarter ass this verse to determine if ya verse will sell...
fukit ill end this quick an hand this kid his 7th L
^nice close: 6/10

Payce: 48.33% ill

Reflectionz: 55.71% ill

Vote: Ref.

Both y'all, keep elevatin..........................~1~pz