<-- Speechless.

And not because this is bad.
I mean the content is shocking to say the very least..
But for some odd reason, I loved this piece.
I cant relate to either the father or daughter, and yet while reading it I felt the intimacy of the piece, like I was lurking in a dark corner there somewhere watching it happen.
Its written flawlessly, all technical aspects were perfect.

I understand your reasoning in ceasing when you did, Im not sure I could ever bring myself to write something like this, and I know I could never write it so eloquently.. but I like where your description takes it, all but the police in the end. Simply because to me what you have written so far, and the outline of where you want to take it, is much more impacting with just the father and daughter being a part of it. Introducing more characters to me (even though their appearance would be brief most liekly) seems out of sorts.. Might just be my take on it though. I think it would lose some of that intimacy..

As always you have utilised your eccentricity and shock value to really evoke my senses.. Kudos.

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