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Old 01-03-04, 12:48 PM   #15
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---spektas verse

~Opener~
I'll smash that damn gash that you use for a mouth
Thought it was a pussy the way shit just 'oozes' out

lol...good pounch funny opener

~Warm-Upz~
I'm smashin ya spine, killin' ya life 'support'
doin' what your mom should have done wit' you -abort
`n shorten ya life span into non-existence
the way you swallow tha cock, you need no assistance
resistance to pain from my words can't happen
Don't you hear everyone beggin' you "PLEASE, stop rappin'!!"
I slapped ya little pussy- ya mouth fulla nut
these lines filled you up like dick to 'little-teen-sluts'

pounches, metas, wordplay overall a very stronge verse

~Skull Crusha (Finisher)~
You lost control in this battle like I snatched tha remote
Got treated like inmates -you just dropped tha soap...

still laughing strong pounchs wordplay
good structure itt flowed right


---the deception verse

I spit-scripts, to RIP-kids, and your jus a new ASS-HOLE...
RELIGIOUS?Wit my SHOE ON YOUR CHEST,your jus the LAST SOLE

good wordplay

UP LIFT this kid, fuck his avy he still can't be FLY...
1-3? Joined in NOV? Damn I'm still wonderin why.
Slap you WIT MY DICK, get a SENSE OF MAN HOOD...
Like BLIND BOXERS, your punches don't LAND GOOD...
Keystyles? How?Morbid minds I'm the Locksmith...
Like Math?Well I can predict your battle record,soon to be 1 fith(5)

pretty weak verse nuthing really stood out you came pretty soft

U Rap?It's hard to take you serious like B Rad...
Best respect YOUR ELDERS, even if I'm NOT ROCKIN PLAID.

weak closer

-----------my vote--
spekta
for better verse,pouches, metas, wordplay,structure,floe,opener,and closer

vote on my battle in sig

i took the time
--------deception lol delete that win your sig dawg lol----

no hate jus a honest vote

peace
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