Thread: BK vs 168
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Old 01-03-04, 01:46 PM   #7
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True to my word...

BK:

Look this is the apocalpse…coz u like my cock~on~yo~lips, tha flows ready to rip!//(1)
coz u the kinda guys who likes the dick...don’t get to close coz im ready empty the clique//(2)
^good opener, nice multis: 7/10

throw a punch, u goda a fat lip…so do no tell me wat I can not see, coz you’re the definiton of a fake MC//(3)
your rymes decline wen u hear mine…my lyrics got vocabulary words u can not define//(4)
^all filler, and WAY too extended lines: 4/10

goda bat..i hit u in the spine, u fall down…u never saw that I was planning this…u r blind//(5)
im one of a kind…master mind murders through out the years…but still got respect from my prison pears//(6)
^Your prison pears? (Peers?) Do you eat them daily too? This line did not work: 4/10

Its pretty clear…I got the 4-5 near, hate to see u in despair, so y don’t I assasin u while im here//(7)
but im not…coz it seems that u love me a lot, don’t fuck with a G, coz youll end up deceased//(8)
^ehh: 4/10

6 feet deep…that’s the depth you will see… listen to me, my lyrics murder any G but me//(8)
its reality…it goda be… jumped you once, and still you didn’t learn… who the fuck u think I be!//(9)
^more stretched lines & filler, this bar didn't say anything: 3/10

(Finish him)
Its ya murder…front page in the local magazine, respect me coz I own u, coz if u don’t these lyrics will be the truth//
coz youll soon see me on MTV inside a music booth…im da best in this game like base ball and babe ruth//(10)
^could have come a lot harder as a closer. 4/10

168:

--------opener----
Its funny didn't check in jus "cut and pasted" his verse its prewritten...
no personals i asumme cuz its all recycled from a another site IR ima post this cuz its "bitten"
^Nice open: 7/10

---continue---
u dont got a chance heres ^^ da PROOF OF THE KNOWN TRUTH
your gonna capture my rhyme bulettes in your PHONE BOOTH
^you said feeding is ok, so nice flip on his verse: 8/10

this guy's an Actress, fuck handin u clips, spit rhymes that stick
u'd think he was a sick porn star the way he Demandin the dick
^decent lines, no real punch tho: 5/10

I’m ‘Taking Ya’ Down’ Like “Last Year’s Calendar”BK Come Hard?
This Kid Is ‘No Big Deal’ Like “Playing Poker With Just 10 Cards
^LMAO, nice hit: 9/10

------closer-------
to Curse-Ya-Spits And Have Ya *Heatin Ya Self Up* As If i Reversed-Ya-Clips...(verse)
-WTF?! ILL ASS wordplay: 10/10

Tribal will Keep A *Knife to The Middle Of ya Lyrics* So people will Know Why All ya Verses-Be-Split...
^LMAO, one of the hardest closes I've seen: 10/10

Sick ass verse, 168, I came at this a lil' skeptical, but you cleared that up.
BK, your verse started out str8 DOPE, but fell off hard.

BK: 26/60 = 43.33% ill

168: 49/60 = 81.66% ill

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