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Old 01-03-04, 02:17 PM   #3
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Sup mayne..

You had some original shit in there, on the real abstract tip. Nice flow, and nice inner rhyme schemes on some lines too. You got an awkward structure, but i can work wit that cos thats how i write for Audio's.

Good shit overall, nice imagery and wording.

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