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Originally posted by DNF
ite pretty average battle... heres how i saw it...
Tolerant:
nothing really stood out, you keep on the same style of using violen lines, and your pressing that too much, maybe its okay for a set up, but you miss the whole punch line by staying on that kind of concept, you really need to start developing witty punches and new creative concepts in battles...
dw:
hmmmm... okay verse, you had some okay lines, but only thing thats gonna drop you down in my voting, is the fact that you feeded off his verse, like flipped his idea', yea im from manchester and that, it might be good as a personal, but you shouldnt feed off a verse... some average lines, okay concepts, but nothing really strong... so this is how i saw it...
Tolerant/dw: out of 10...
punches: 2/3 - both indirect, but dw's were wittier...
personals: 2/2 - kinda close, nothing really great from either...
wordplay: 2/2 - tie again, both had some idea's nothing great...
flow/multi's: 2/3 - TL had basic rhyme scheme, not consistant, dw was a bit better and had some okay multi's...
creativity: 2/4 - TL stayed with violence, dw had more varied topics...
overall: 10/14...
both need to elevate... im surprised dw has 49 wins with such a simple verse structure... Tolerant you have potential but need to develop punches and creative idea's to help you out,
props to both emcee's... stay up. 1.
VOTE = DW
and if either of you could vote on my battle vs BuzzKill... its really getting slept on and needs any votes... so if either of you could drop an honest vote we'd both appreciate it...
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TL had very weak punches... TERRIBLE DISPLAY!
DW has so many wins cuz he beat newbies like this... get a easy win then lose to a vet... simply told...
ok battle
my vote-DW....
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