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Flyweight
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IP:
tolerante verse:
dw as i prepare to see u ~Chrode slowly~
in ur death cause u aint even born u a Froze ~Embroe hurting~
but all i cn see is a bitch from from manchester so u ~Full of Shit~
if i was in ur country i would break ur spine and bury u~Fool Quik~
man i see u a estimator wat u estimate how big ~Centrals diks~
are, 1 of ur crew members said man he estimates how big his ~anal is~
i said why?every one has been in him till he bleeds and his ripped his~ Ventrical to shit~
look im gonna see ur human body fluids ~Decintergrate Externally~
ur crew shouold slow down or they get a bullet in high ~Penetrate Internally~
as this comes to closure, ur mind and internal organs killed like a bitch bein ~Raped Constantly~
pretty weak pounches
ok personal
meta
DW verse:
my tolert level is low n bein put to the test...
u spit 10 lines n not one stood out or impressed...
jus wanted to exclaim to ya RIP..in pieces u'll rest...
tolerant u surpass wack wen even the pope cudnt make u blessed...
now u begin to realise u shud av wore a bullet proof vest...
imma fire 2 rounds at ya back so u stick out ur chest...
...wiv pride...like me...yeh im from manchester...
but im the one wiv wins that ur still to register...
u way out of ur league like a low division team in a cup tie...
why oh why did u even try...spit hot rhymes in ya ear to watch ya brains fry....1
opener:better pounch using tolentes name(personal)
flow:had a better flow to my reading he had a better structre but could use a bit of work
metas:closer was hot...lol
overall vote with a better verse
DW
--vote my battle in sig
--i took the tine
peace
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