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Old 01-03-04, 03:09 PM   #27
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verse by 730



This battle's done with, cuz when i'm thru w/ him he'll need pention
as i Knock docs ass, into a whole different time dimension
here's a question?, are u playin or are u truly this lame?
cuz dude stays underscores anywhere, N i ain't talkin bout his name
this's a game for me, cuz the first few bars'll be as funny
as i show this Doc what's up.......like a fuckin Bugs bunny
Listen Hunny, you'll get stuffed like pennies under a couch
while ya angry flow gets trash canned, like oscar the grouch
i'll bust ya in tha mouth, let my juices flow right through
ya eyes, nose, mouth, stomach, chest and even ass too
i'll blast you, till ya layin stomach up on the floor
but...
you've been fucked so much it's like you've already been there before
You're losin this whore, N this win i'm takin it slick
while i'll beat this kid sloppy, like he does to his dick
stompin this chick, slut you'll get the worse of these shots
cuz Doc just slams against a wall, when he thinks he's hard knocks

ok verse nuthing came on stronge no hard pounchs a bit of word play a bit of metas no structr or flow

verse by doc

id be scared of the seven, if there was reason to be
half your shit didnt make sense, might as well have said "tweedledee"
and if ima need a pension, let me fuckin explain why
ima retire on all my sales, while you stand idly by
your rhyme aint ill, you're just a fuckin joke
and shit i should know, its my profession to diagnose
i may be bugs bunny, but you're porky pig, bitch
cuz you stumble through your rhyme, whole body in a twitch
pennies under a couch? thats fine, good to me
cuz i guess you didnt realize we were talkin your salary
my flow is like a river, and your style is "choke"
i could come up with more shit if 1000 blunts i had smoked
you the spit the same shit as everyone else on RB
bring somethin new, and i might give an s-h-i-t
just one more thing to say before i off this cat
fuck you muthafucka, and god damnit thats that

better overall verse better pounchs came on very stronge alote of metas multies and better wordplay better structre and flow

overall vote goes to doc

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