Thread: :) vs taxback
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Old 01-03-04, 03:49 PM   #15
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ite this is how i saw it...


Taxback:

i dont really know what to say about ya verse, but it lacked... lacked hard punches, anydirect personals, no real wordplay... didnt have a consistant flow or rhyme scheme, wasnt bad, but you need to elevate a lot in these area's...


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wow, i really enjoyed reading ya verse, had some really creative ideas, funny punches, good personals and name wordplay, flow and multi's was good thru out... reall did more than you needed to, just to win this battle...


pretty much dominated this whole battle, with better punches, some good personals, and wordplay, some might have been played but it was a much better overall verse than taxback...


props to both emcee's... keep at it taxback you got potential...

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and if either of you could drop an honest vote on my battle with buzzkill we'd both appreciate it. that battles been up for like a week now...
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