Flyweight
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IP:
ite here is how it went down...
Warren:
not a bad verse... had some nice idea's, good creative stuff, some lacked a hard direct punch line or witty comment to finish it off, but ya wordplay did help you out, multi's were good, some of ya rhymes did seem out of place, but ya flow was good thru the piece...
Aragorn
not a bad verse either, came with a different approach, using personals to your advantage, if the personals are true then it did well in this battle... some lines still lacked an edge, like could of had a punch or little wordplay to finish off the line, but you got your point across, some okay idea's... put up a good battle...
quite an even battle, close call, so ill have to break it down...
Warren/Aragorn: out of 10:
Punches- 8/6: warren had some witty punches that stood out over aragorns...
Personals- 4/6: aragorn had some good personals and used them well to his advantage, warren didnt have much...
Wordplay- 7/5: again warren had some really tight idea's, and creative stuff that really worked well for him...
Multi's/Flow- 7/7: this was a close call, both had nice multi's and a consitant flow, so i had to call you a tie on this...
Creativity- 8/6: Warren just had the better and more original idea's, really stood out in his battle verse...
Overall:
Warren = 34
Aragorn = 30
a good battle from both, but warren's creative idea's and witty punches stood out in the battle and gave him the edge...
props to both emcee's...
VOTE = WARREN PIECE
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