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Old 01-03-04, 05:16 PM   #5
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tech knows he wack.. came to kick my ass and brought a lunch
so i set up a picnic.. ate tha herb.. and ended it with one punch

Blah .. that an Ok Starter .. should have came harder dawg 3/10

..kids got a kaosphobia.. tryed to spit.. but he can't handle fear
i started ripping.. tach got scared.. and jumped to tha chandlelear

Not Very Good ... 4/10

imprint ya ass in tha assfault.. leave your flesh embeded in pavement
BS? save it.. could incircle crap with enigmas and still not amaze shit

. . . . 4/10

he's at tha highest point of his elevation.. right now tha devils above him
coming elevated higher than everest to pound you through tha summit

above him .. summit .. no ryhme there partner 2/10

hard? technician's soft.. emcees eat his ryhmes like gerber babys food
but my flow..will leave this pussy more exposed than.. ladies nude

This Was A Good Line .. i Have To Admit ... 8/10

No Hate dawg ... Basicaly u need to hit harder with punches ... u got good structure .. and good ideas .. but u need to take that extra step and get creative

Overall - 5/10


...... Waiting On Technicans Verse

Peace