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Old 01-03-04, 05:28 PM   #9
TheUnderRated
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alright kool check it.............

tech knows he wack.. came to kick my ass and brought a lunch
so i set up a picnic.. ate tha herb.. and ended it with one punch
..kids got a kaosphobia.. tryed to spit.. but he can't handle fear
i started ripping.. tach got scared.. and jumped to tha chandlelear
imprint ya ass in tha assfault.. leave your flesh embeded in pavement
BS? save it.. could incircle crap with enigmas and still not amaze shit
he's at tha highest point of his elevation.. right now tha devils above him
coming elevated higher than everest to pound you through tha summit
hard? technician's soft.. emcees eat his ryhmes like gerber babys food
but my flow..will leave this pussy more exposed than.. ladies nude


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Ok no hate here Kaos but y the fuck couldn't you come at me like that.....I would of won then......cry....anyway heres what i saw....a couple memorable lines....not much originiality the wordplay was not as on point as it has been in the past and its just not enough to take tech in this one...........mabye next time just try playin with your verse a bit more....think verbs and work similes off of em it helps....

you'll never elevate past me but you might stop near me.....
You should be callin' me Socratees the way I drop Theory
This fag Reppin' Central without one good battle crudential
To Insure you is essential, punches rock you like Prudential
Your hoping your verse can be filled and just display no holes
But when you go skiing is the only time your ever gettin polls
Flow is off just a little bit, Tech eat you like Peanut brittle bitch
Ur verse I fiddle width, stretch ur face like ur lines an dribble sipts
Ya structure is fucked it looks like it's about to be brakin' slightly
Maybe you'll win Michael Jackson bitch ass won't be taken lightly

yea i was feelin this nice personals..good worplay i liked the similes adn the wordplay within the punches...you really came nice and hard on this one and your hard work paysoff in my opinion ...........i think tech took this no hate either way...

i still LOVE YOU Kaos Theory..... both y'all peep my battle with postman should be good one..........