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Flyweight
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IP:
theunderated verse
you comin softer than satin pillows while i'm just tryin to relax..
smoke you worse than your avy then puff puff pass...
good opener nuthing really strong though
i'll kick you between the polls like i'm in the NFL...
your record like old people can't get up after it fell...
weak pounch and personal
i'll burn you with acid cause its coarsin through my viens...
teach you lessons of life like you a fag kid on growin pains...
lol...ok verse good meta
like glocks to knots i'll up and leave your mind blown..
so stupid you tryed to battle on O mega and not a microphone..
lol good pounch
RE finishin this kid like he was a piece of fine furinture...
like in a mexican standoff i had to bust first to murder ya....
good closer
overall nuthing really strong in this verse good pounches and metas good flow and structre
postmans verse
if this is a "work" out , ill just have to rely on "test"
no need for name calling, ya avy describes you best,
better opener
just 2 oozies, and a clip "instated",
then burry you at the movies, Now your really "Under-Rated",,
lol...pounche aand personal was stronge
your a lyricist? you either insane, or jokin,
You'd still lose this battle, if all 5 of ya aliases were votin,
pounch was hard
Now, the next bed ya gonna lie in is where the "coronors work",
cuz after this battle, ya record BACKWORDS WONT be same place those "foreigners work",
pounch wordplay personal
But that aint sayin much, it dont take a "pyschic,"
Cuz in ya crew ya like karate moves, ya just a "side kick",
lol...personal and pounch
so, sign off the net, get a life, now that might work...
cuz you know your a loser, when a VIRUS could end ya lifes work....
ok closer
---postman is my vote---
for better pounchs and personal came on really strong
also better wordplay
i took the time
vote for my battle in sig
peace
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