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Old 01-03-04, 06:52 PM   #9
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aged...settin dates with guys that bring her close to heavens gate

stop the binges please, you dont know wut is bringin
your off the hinges ever since you gone and start swingin

we all have guts and sooner or later we spill it...
if your life is empty you dont need a dick to fill it

this was very nice^^^^they were my favourite lines of this, the only thing i think it lacked was emotion, it did have some but needed more for this type of subject...but i mean as it is now...its a great piece
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