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Old 01-03-04, 07:48 PM   #12
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verse by bugz

kaos theory ya mus be phsycotic, think ya rhymes is kaotic//
I leave emcees hypnotised people say my lines are hypnotic//

good opener flowed jus right

ya 18-3 about to be 4, my punches hit u hard n leave you sore//
ya from portland im blazin ya trailz 20-0 thye got out scored//

pounc was good

ya sig is so whack what is the fuckin point of rockin it bitch//
how you tryin to act like u hard, ill smoke cannibus...//

good pounch and personal

im scarin this kid hes beginin ta shake, as if this is a fukin earthquake//
i still got 2 lines left, ya best watch ya step, n u gotta except, ya fukin fate//

blah no pounchs

i throw one more punch n then ill leave, aint worth my time bitch please//
so ya say your built to fuck me up but i never seen you fukin Kill Emcees..//

good closer
honestly i expected better from bugz no hate
good pounches but they weren't stronge enough
ok structure and flow

verse by kaos

Bugz vanished.. fuck lost.. defeated so bad.. his sneaks got cut off
..but watch..

good opener good wordplay

couldn't see a verse more blank..if you stared at television shut off
revealing mistakes.. you lighter than light.. no ones feeling ya rank
gone thru puberty?..when he spits.. sounds like sucked on helium tanks

lol...good pounch stronge and personal

should of wished you luck.. you need it.. dawg you shoud of ducked
battling Bugz is like a porn shoot.. cuz tha minute he shows.. hes fucked

good pounch

im burning hot.. plus i rip hides.. B tryed to punch.. left him with burnt fists
Bunny its Funny.. even if you flipped sides.. i'd still put you on your own merk list

personal and pounch stronge closer

overall vote kaos for a stronger overall verse
stronger pounches personals wordplay
could work on struture

not hating jus a vote

vote on my recente battle in sig

peace
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