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Old 01-03-04, 08:03 PM   #12
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yo i'll vote honestly you guys need it

skrollz verse



I'm a pro dawg...no novice...the emcee with no losses
YOU deal with more MALE than the Canadian Postoffices

good opener stronge pounch

Kinetic dont think I wont pop ya....if I pull out a gat
I'll have you running for cover like an offencive quarterback

aight line no hard pounch

as a matter of fact... we know you dont belong in rap
you should try being a dj.... or.... sumthing like that

weak

You aint on my level dwag... might as well let it be
like a ungly broad wanna fuck... aint no way u seein me

weak

you can telll im truthful...jus listen to this shit I speak
ever wonder why ur grl hasnt been home in a week.....

lol...good closer got me laughing

you need to elevate try reading vet battles to get new and hard ideas try to us personals no hate jus helping you out

tele verse



I know your sixteen, I seen ya birthday its in eighty seven
But the only number you need to know now is nine eleven (911)

better opener

I bet you got a crew for them an you im slayin bars
The only aces that you got is when your playin cards

ok not that great of a pounch but still strong

After im done with you, you'll be dead an wont be missed
You a bitch spittin shit even John Stocktin cant ASSIST

good pounch

I grow tired of this rhyme its about time I got to the point
Only way you got dope lines, is if you spit smokin a joint

good pounch creative

I got game like monopoly while you still on some chutes an ladders
You take whole box of ex-lax an still wont be droppin shit that matters

closer was good

this verse was weak also but stronger from the two
better and stronger pounchs was used

both need to elevate

vot on my recent battle in sig

peace
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