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Old 01-03-04, 08:12 PM   #24
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verse by PRO

yo, the 'beef' between us is to remain like 'legless-cows'...'ground'
you couldn't come up with original rhymes so you looked in 'textbooks'...like it was 'lost-and-found' spendin ya nights 'watchin-gangsta-movies' just so you can claim
you 'grew-up-on-da-streets'...ain't never 'blew-up-on-tha-streets'
even if you had 'bombs-strapped-to-ya-waist'...
havin an 'intelligent-battle' wit u is like havin a 'battle-of-wits' n
u comin 'unarmed'...couldn't 'produce' tight shit if you 'moved-out-west-and-farmed'...
everytime i spit, i make this nigga 'cry'...its like i'm da fuckin
'reign-man'(rain man)..bitch you been on my 'wanted-listed' longer
than fuckin 'saddam-hussein'...this 'defeat' i'm handin u make u like 'david-blaine'...just 'magically-disappear'

ok well good overall pounchs they were strong some personals and metas but pretty weak verse by you though


dizzy verse

A'yo prophacyz man dat shit was wank,
Boy u aint got enough skills 2 Robb an open safe bank!//

best of the two openers

But wen u hear d Buzz of my Chainsaw,
U'll b think wat d fuck is he chasin my ass for?//

ok

Well its bcus ur lyrics are so laim,
There drivin me insane,i asked myself wat can kill this pain?
Ino a bullet thru ur brain!//


pounch


Look at my last 3 lines they put u2 shame,
Boy u best had realise this is a mans Game!//

ok

Boy idid it in 10 lines quick,go pay a hoe 2suck ur dick!//

blah weak

better struture and flow but still pounchs were weak

overall vote goes to Prophacy foe harder pounchs and personals
since its wat really makes a good battle

not hating jus an honest vote

vote for my battle in sig

peace
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