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Flyweight
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IP:
verse by lp
Have yah cut like "Blade Sales Graphs" my 'Knife-Is-Charting'!! I assault till yah life-is-parting /
an have disaster strike, when i leave "'Bru' Out Fast"(brew) like an 'open bar' at an *Irish Party*!! //
good opener
Yah "Accepting The Bad" like *Agreeing-With-Crimes*!! havin this chump fleein-these-rhymes /
Kid yah wack, watch as my force leaves "'Brutal' Out In The Open" like the |Guillotine Times|!! //
lol...good pounch wordplay and meta
Blows "Fold Yah Into Dictionarys" and have yah *Comming To Terms*!! my smarts-are-triggered /
yuh losin hope, my punches leave this kid |Down In The Dumps| like a fuckin |Garbage Picker|!! //
lol...good stronge ounchs and metas
I have yah "Quick To Look For Breaks" like |Eager Surfers|!! yah wack, this kids-a-newbie /
son yah cant touch my creativity, so phresh'll leave "Brutal Out Of Site" like *Disney Movies*!! //
aight verse pounch
Got him "Surrounded By Pressure" like *Ocean Divers*!! leave yuh shunned-and-bothered /
yuh cant survive this son, cause im constantly "Dismissing Yuh Dreams" like |Grumpy Fathers|!! //
lol...wordplay pounchs and metas
Im sorry but you "Suck Too Much To Be Positive" like 'AIDS TESTS'!! got yah beat, ill bet-money /
go home. yah no threat-dunny, cause phresh simply "Has B Stuck"(bee) like |Fresh Honey|!! //*
lol....good closer nice dropp shorten your lines though
stronge verse
pounchs
wordplay
metas
opener
closer
Biggas verse
o lil phresh, your battling with best
I advise you pack a vest//
blah weak
In this game theirs no room for faggits
so why are you parading around with one of ya vibrating dildo gadgits
you got a maggit, to make it big you grab it and drag it//
meh weak pounch played out
Your puches are like a man with no arms throwing a hook
I think battling you I'm in luck, cause you suck//
nuthing yet
I'm gonna do to you what whitneys husband done to her
except I'm gonna murder yer, I'm in luck cause no one has ever heard of yer//
boring
In papers the next morning it reads fat boy killed and we have no leads//
lil phresh you don't wanna battle me your fucked
your to fat to rap what the fuck your even shuck//
shuck worst then louise woodward did to the baby
when your dead I'm gonna be like romeo ' ITS ALL GRAVY '
When EM said lets -get down to BUISNESS
He didn't mean grab ya dick and kiss this
I think my rhymes have done the buisness,
My lyrics have done the killin', WHILE YOUR DICK IN MENS MOUTHS HAS DONE THE FLLIN'
yo this was weak nuthing really stood out in this verse
---------vote LP------------
vot on my battle in sig
no hate jus a n honest vote
peace
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