this. battle. sucked.

lyrical humour, holy shit. you had stupid, non-rhyming punches. you didn't have any wordplay, and it was absolutely not clever at all. all you did have were personals, which, really, dont matter when you're rapping about how much better football is than basketball. honestly, lines like "So how is ur mum, I aint seen her in ages, last time we met I gave her some babies" make me feel embarrassed to be part of the same site as you.

dialect...i agree with tactical, you had horrible structure. however, that was offset by the fact that you had things that actually rhymed. most of the punches were weak, and you didnt really have any great wordplay, but anything is better when compared to lyrical. one other thing, they spell it "humour" in britain, and since he said mum, i think we can surmise that he is british, and thus, it makes sense.

anyway....

vote: dialect

despite the fact that since i grilled you, i dont think you will, but hey, i spent time on your battle, do the same for me:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...did=103574--vs. handcuffs