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De M-O-D Bruk
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IP:
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
.Lyke *Recently Divorced Men* people soon to be Searching For Cel
Cause I Got *CD* on lock tighter than a expensive Stereo
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Not Sure Where The Rhyme Is. Whack Opener
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
Cant beat me so u *chasing Your Dreams*Literally Like Sleepwalkers
Kass’ll shove candy down ya throat, so u can try n be a Sweat-Talker
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Good Punch. Nice Delivery.
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
Jus drop mah verse n already this win is Forming
visibly his writtens are *Up To No Good* like *Satan In The Morning*!!
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Okay Punch.
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
Lyke *retards wit sketches* , Cel *Shows No Trace Of Talent*
Cause I got Cel Searching For His Words More Than Awkward-Moments
Call me *B* cause Ill Be On Top of Your Eyes' like a *Red Sox Fitted*
U aint sik ya jus tha Common Cold lyke when a Veteran Spitted
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Repeated "lyke" again..that's annoying. Alot of people deemed retards are actually brilliant artists. Don't follow that punch. Decent Red Sox Punch. Weak Last Punch.
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
Kid look Im on top of this Beef lyke a fuckin Seasoning Salt
K got this kid covering his face more than Super Hero faluts
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Decent Punches. Back To Back. Nice Recovery.
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
Ya softer than the prayer of a desperate parent fo all ya Aliaes
Cause *Im quick ta serve Cell* like an *impatient-waitresses*
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Meh. Nothin' Special. Maybe Cause It's Convuluded. 
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
Say u hotten than me?? Mah verse will leave ya thoughts wit Bends
Cause tha day u win is tha day I can name Eveyone in Wits End(lmao)
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What You Can't Read? Wits End Has Got Some High Profile Vets. Whack Punch. And The Whole "(lmao)" Shit. That's Whacker Than Whack.
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
K’ll let ya Head Rest Like The Definition Of Pillow Fight
N then ill have ya stomach on tha ground lyke Sleepin Bag nights!!
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Nice Combo. Again. Recovered Nicely From Your Shaky Past Lines.
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
Cover This Dick like *men at dinner following Napkin Manners*
Cause ya Wit End, as I leave ya Face out of place lyke larger Banners
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Don't Understand.
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
Smash in ya Face, n leave ya bones exposed though ya Jaw
I would diss all ya Aliaes, jus that kno1 knows who tha FUCK they R!!!(lmfao)
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Jaw and R...doesn't rhyme. Good Punches Though. Good Closer.
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Originally posted by KaSsidy
Woah aiight kid…lmao on tha real u might feal some pain after this…dont worry, cause even if u spit weak this verse will make this go to tha Fame...so jus try ya best lmao...
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Well..This Was Wierd Verse. At One Moment You Had Dope Punches And Than It Was Whack Solid. Can't Play That Game In Pinkslips. And The Whole LMFAO, And LMAO throughout Was Upping The Whack Points. Don't Laugh At Your Own Punches, That's Retarded. This Doesn't Look Good Kid.
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
My textual specimen's the most excellent testament
you'll get dominated and fucked like an S&M specialist
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Dope Opener. Not Much Else To Say. Like A Mike Tyson 1st Round In His Prime.
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
I don't recommend testin this, frequent punches rip this mc
leave you slumped in misery, eating crumpets n sippin tea
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Good Delivery Once Again.
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
tried ya chump shit dissin me, but only your e-half as tight
so you just fucked yourself like u a lonely hermaphrodite
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LOL. Now That Was Entertaining.
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
gettin carrie'd, come up with a plan to survive the dance
cause you couldn't spit nice with Flanders saliva glands
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 Ouch. That Hurts.
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
yo behold the shittyness, quickest battle of the century
your rhymes is hideous, so put that in your parentheses
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 <----What This Did To K
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
New to Rb, actin tuff but this newbies scared shitless
Ya wack..0-0 and you already got a fuckin win list
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Okay Punch.
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
Obviously you cant read, 6 battles open at one time
I would report u to IR, but ill jus give u loss by my lines
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Decent Punch.
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
Wit no proof or evidence, not belivin I beat Chrit
Well im that Shadow that killed him, bitch I am Slik
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Nice.
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
Not following my rules..outlaw! ha...u made the lines 15
Dumb fuck..everyone knows, newbie or vet...
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No Rhyme. Horrible Closer.
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Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
...You rhyme 2 lines not 3
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Everyone Has Their Own Scheme.
This Was a lopsided battle. You weren't playing catch up and you did a good job of proving your record. Your Closer Sucked, need to work on that but you did good.
Celestal had a solid verse throughout and punches hit hard, shallow on the personal side but he packed way more punch. K hit up WEC and check out those tips so you have a solid verse and don't play catchup. Celestal..hit up WEC for instructions on a closer.
Vote: Celestal.
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