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Old 01-04-04, 12:31 AM   #1
Tyler Durden
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re doing my vote.....

kass... you forced all your main things you said...... i bet you thought for hours looking for tha right punches..... all tha key words in your lines ryhmed...creative.....but tha flow was off....
and all that....*'() shit messed up tha read........

dialect...... easy to read....you threw out mad vocab.....and hard hitting punches....with about tha same word play as kass....so that canceled out.... your structure was perfect compared to kass.....

so


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