This Was A Pretty Good Piece For A Startin' Out Newbie.Structure Can Use Some Major Work,Try To Use Some More Multis.
Quote:
mami said she doesn't like a nigga's attitude cuz I carry you
cuz you lied, in this rap shit I'm underrated like Larry Hughes
I keep switchin up my style cuz these bums are gettin closer
my life is getting kind of better instead of lookin more grosser
Jay-z sample-------->"That's right it's wicked, that's life I live it"
Jay-Z sample--->"I'm trying to live it to the limit and love it a lot"
its tha way of life
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^^Diden't Rhyme^^
Plus You Using Quotes That Other Rappers Have Said Seems A Little Herbish & Gay Cause You Can't Come Up With Your Own Lryics To Fill In Those Extra Lines.
6.5/10