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Old 01-04-04, 02:12 AM   #4
Menik
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Yeah this was a good collab here.....made a pretty nice read....both of you had good flow in this i thought, it fell off in some parts in both verses but it was good through out the collab....vocab from both was pretty good....your structure was alright, just watch the line lenght on some of your guys lines....you both had some alright multies...but overall this was a good collab...keep at it.
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