Viscosity: good imagery, although the flow was off and lacking in a rhyme scheme, some original stuff in here but the rhyming vocab that linked it was basic.

Seklusion: criticism here is the same as Viscosity, except that your flow was very broken and difficult to read, you need to make your lines the same length so people dont strain their eyes trying to read them.

your styles were very similar and were topics which made as a good collab. keep writing.