breakdown:

This bitch wanted a twist so he so he called on the 2 tymer//
lookin to win a battle but is too shy for a rhymer//
^^^eh, weak. bad punch.
Dope supplier, Wheelin and dealin, Smokin on shit thats fire//
you is just a crack buyer, you gotta be addicted cause you smoke more rocks than Richard Prior//
^^^weak punch.
Ya a denyer? Only to the fact that you'd rather have dick than vagina//
^^^...what?
Faggot nigga, Want a gun war buy you don't even know what's a trigga//
^^^another weak punch.
I'm Pullin triggaz makin bitch niggaz retreat//
The only outcome you ever meet is defeat//
^^^better the some, but still boring.
Bitch ass is weak, like all the little pussies just dyin to trick or treat//
^^^really really weak.
Candy, is the only thing that makes you happy//
ya too nappy, You've just been found out dawg, ya style's not even rapping//
^^^...another weak punch. just nothing in this verse.
More like a nurcery rhyme, i do so much damage you'd forget about clolmbine//
^^^forced rhyme, makes no sense.
Fact after fack this bitch believes in fables//
Wanted me to spit first just cause he isn't able//
Instead of even tryin to right take a nap watch Ann of green gables///
^^^more useless forced rhymes...weak. not a good close.


Yo, You Wanna Fight Kid? My Scripts'll You With A Fractured Chin//
As Weak As Tyme Is He Couldn't Even Be On Point Flowing On Top Of A Pyramid//
^^^weak punch, but decent wordplay.
A Weak Blow'll Crack Yah Skeleton, So just give up..Yah Too Weak Black//
While I Stay Ill..I Could've Been On Love Connection And Still Wouldn't Find My Match//
^^^heh, good punch, nice wordplay.
My Punchlines'll Leave 2Tymer More 'Heart Broken' Then 'Owen's Back'//
I'm Up For Hand To Hand Combat And The Wrong To Ever Try To Fuck With//
I'll Bust Quick..While You Couldn't Even Spit Sick Suffering With Oral Syphillis//
^^^decent, but its the same kinda thing people say all the time. reused...but, ok wordplay.
Laying Sick Ass Scripts..That'll Leave Yah Weak Ass Tired And Outdone//
My Lines Just Begun, But Look..Quip 'Eats More Kids' Then Bitches Who Swallow The Cum//
^^^lol....nice punch. awesome wordplay.
Yah Done..Got Herbed And Bitched Without Any Physical Contact//
This'll Be Yah First DeFEET..So You Won't Be Able To Make A Walking Comback//
^^^more good wordplay.
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I'll Replace Yah Spine With A Gat...And If You Got Beef I Got Cha Back!!!
^^^decent closer, ok wordplay.

Vote: C. Quip


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