Yo that was a real reply man much love I will hit up ya shit when I see it.
It did have internals maybe they're jus' not good enough to stand out but here are some of em

The "benefit I gain" from verbal "expression" is immeasurable to me
"When I spit my game" my "next quetion's" is it pleasurable to read?
The "pleasure's all mine" when I spit "rhymes" "fluently" flowin' fluidly
I "treasure my lines" cos they "shine" "beautifully" like golden •••elery
Lyrics paintin' my "mental pictures" my mind an' rhymes showin' unity
Each verse an "essential scripture" in the path I've chosen musically

I think all the lines have either seperate internals or internal multis but it's hard to get both. The advice on the wordplay hit the nail on the head man I'm gonna work on a piece wit good word play.