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IP:
breakdown
flow-mindtrap
structure-mindtrap...ref ur structure is somethin u need to work on it was somewhat stretched
humor-mindtrap...average 50 posts of dayz was kinda comical
vocab-reflektionz
punches-both
personals-mindtrap...got on him from months ago and bout him gettin banned
metas-ref
multies-neither
wordplay-ref
creativity-ref i thought that barry bonds line was nice as long as the smoke and marlboro staff shit
complexity-ref
overall-ref
good battle i thought ver close
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