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Old 01-04-04, 01:42 PM   #17
doc_knock
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look, it only takes 10 lines to beat a dude, ill let him choose//
(two choices) take it like a man, or eat ya food through a tube//
^^^good wordplay...decent punch
thats liquid food, straight to ya tummy, i will merk this dummy//
im laughin at ya name............... but aint a damn thang funny//
^^^lol...good punch.
my style mo flexible than gumby.... but you aint got no style//
since ya pops aint around, ima have ta punish you like my child//
^^^good wordplay, good punch.
.....tarheel, i scar and kill, put that heat to ya teeth, and burn ya grill//
i pop these pussies like valum pills, but i aint no substance abuser//
^^^ok punch...but no rhyme.
beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, thats how i do it man//
i done wet you up so bad, they gonna call me the fireman//
^^^lol...nice punch...good personal.




ayo its fyreboy u better call dat truck/
for i come down to atl fuck u up/
^^^weak.
dis dude so ugly he couldnt ge a date if he flipped back his calender/
dude so young can even buy a beer/
^^^....um...fuckin weak
aye homie i got dumbo on the phone he whats back his ears/
when i beat u homie try to fight back the tears/
^^^eh...weak punch...at least it makes sense
dis bitch nigga put the factor in the fear/
ill rip his voice box den scream in ear/
^^^lol...ok wordplay
man i dont give a damn bout nigga/
i rip em in his on basement like big tigger/
^^^bad closer.

vote: kuntryboi