firstly, man learn to use cool edit or sumthing cuz no matter how good a track may be, it sounds garbage instantly the way uve recorded it. i aint meanin to h8 but thats true.

anyways u seemed to stay on beat consistantly and sounded aiight when u went fast, but as i sed u cant pic up many of the words bar the hook cuz of the awful way uve recorded it.

as i sed i aint h8in man.

peace dunn

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