Very enjoyable to read.... The words made sense and the flow was nice.....

To make this better, try to stay on topic... It seems as if you drifting off a lot in this writing.... Try to stay focused on your topice.... The 1st and 3rd verse was find, but I got lost in what you were tryna state in the 2nd verse.....

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