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Quoted From MindTrapt
We all knew you were banned.... Jacka? Fuck you freak...
Pry try a rogain like like he did in a tourney for two weeks...
I'll fuck you up... down back forth and every other direction...
After all... who the fuck is honestly afraid of a reflection...
So fuck what ya reppin.... bacon (beggin) for votes I'll kill this pig...
And try to deny it... but until tonight you rocked a bitten 13th sig...
So fuck this whore I swear I'l pimp slap an out of line bitch...
Kids style shouts of '99.... all the shit needs is a style switch..
Can compare... I'm elevated... You talents just up in the air...
Was going to check ya talent... but there just aint none there...
Its aight kid... post ya best... we still know ya fake tho...
Especially when ya quotables were posted by me... 3 months ago...
And dont deny it... the truth unfolds... This kid is gay...
How else would someone average nearly 50 posts a day...
No talent whore... couldnt even rock a rubber band...
Only doubles dates when jerkin and then switching hands....
So call me the messenger bringing you ya first loss and my win
Sepaker of messengers... to win you'll need AIM, YIM, ICQ, and MSN...
You got banned for months... took all ya decent lines and saved it...
Still cant win... in fact this is over... kinda like the way ya rated

OK...Structure was a lil choppy
Punches were decently hard hitting
Vocab.. wasn't much but dont matter that much
Personals... GOOD....Nice and hard...
Props homie... good verse..
Overall..Dope verse...17/20

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Quoted From Reflektionz
Dixie helped u wit personals by dropping his 2 cents..
but still ya Opener lacked skillz or even makin sense..
I gave u 45 minutes so you cud post a decent verse..
but instead,
u post garbage metas an punches that dont even hurt..
So u called me out in my own thread for a challenge..
but u hoped
sumone wak wud respond for ya total lack of Talent...
Dope & its hopeless when I'm throwing explosives & carry Bombs..
While?
Your career is in Left Field, trying to shake hands with Barry Bonds..
Rookie, take out your notepad cause honestly your Mind is Trap
Your styles more smoke & mirror, then A Narcissistic Marlboro Staff..
I'll slice your ankles sonn, even ya mind. basically you lost In Ways..
cause when you
got Sliced, It turned White sox's 2 Red sox's like a chicago-boston Trade..
Re-inact history wit your anatomy, I cant afford to fail..
Dragin' your body parts.. just to watch your Oregon Trail..
ur gurl's like bungee jumpin at the beach, cuz what it takes..
is that youll prolly die with crabs... once the rubber breaks!..
raisin stakes? shuttin down butcher shops just to make ends meat..
your already gettin RUN mind, you didnt have to tag with DMC!

[b]hmmmm....
Alot of played punches
Punches didn't hit hard at all
Personals....Not much
Flow was ok..
Structure was weak...
Overall.......14/20

Vote-MindTrap
Mind came harder in personals
Punches hit harder than reflektionz too...
Overall .... ok battle... But Mind got it...
Good shit for a newbie...Props