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Old 01-04-04, 03:16 PM   #15
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illunatic(another easy win)




He's 17 thinkin he's a threat to me... ... ... ... please
Ya couldn't be an ill threat if ya was a fatal disease

mad opener well done

I'll kill you with ease, you best believe death is near
Full tension with no relieve, how ya gonna step in fear?

aight verse no hard pounch

Done kilt you 2 times, and you still think you can beat me
This the 3rd time i left you shook, face it you can't defeat me

great pounch

Thinkin you gangsta, but your whiter than you are black
Blacks ya race but now ya act, & your rhymes still be wack

wordplay pounch and personal

Shit I went easy on ya ass, Cuz your no competition
Fuck a battle, against me ya not a good opposition

good closer strong
--wordplay
--pounchs
--personals
--opener
--closer
--structure
--flow

myste

yo this fool wanna battle me shit.....
yo can try and beat me like meat ~while i fondle ya bitch/

weak

you can't kill me wit ease when u ain't got no gun
its all fun /when u all up online/ but when we come face to face/
you aint spittin no lines/

nuthing really hit

when it comes to battlin my flo is super
i'll hang you with so much rope~they'lll calll me mr. cooper/
you aint ill .............u aint cancer
ur only problem is where is dancer and prancer~ya lil kid

well first off there is a ten line min not nine
pretty weak verse by you
nuthing really hit
no hate

------vote----------

ILLunatic


vote battle in sig
---i took the time---no hate

peace
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