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Old 01-04-04, 03:26 PM   #12
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casualty

Profit huh? Should have seen this come’n
Well? I see in your future a scared bitch runnin
I'll have you witnessing you own death like you swapped brains with Cleo(Tells the future)
with rhymes this lethal casualty will always remain unequalled
You spit rhymes with lines that make P. Diddy crap shine
I could spit with no punches and you still couldnt touch mines
Hitting profit like a hallucination, its time you start facin
you couldnt be blazin if your rhymes were watched like star gazing
I've mastered these forces, I smash you and leave you nauseous
fuck spittin heat, I spit flames like I'm equipped with torches
I split wigs with axes, knockin you off your axis
with cannons blasting, proven anti-passive you'll be leaving in a casket

well good wordplaying and metas
aight pounchs but nuthing to strong
no personals

with all that said pretty weak overall


TheProphet777

look this is the part were everyone wonders who will win/
Stepping in this thread will get you erased before u start postin/
Cuz im a lyrical genious on the mike and will rip you to bits/
Masterbaiting to porno movies called "Booties and tits"/
But im about to make a murder scene and end this guys misery/
leaving the scene and people wonder if it was a bloody casualty/
Turning this bitch inside out and ripping out his spinal cord/ jack in the box didnt even pop out once with a song for short/
like me wondering how the hell im going against a lone stranger/
Leaving trails of blood from fights wit his icon "power ranger"/
including his sig. tells his whole truth and concepts/
Wondering how the hell he got banned for just postin nonsense/ his bio is useless didnt find one trace of something i could use/
Must be someone that was born with abuse/didnt wanna reaveal his whole truce/
Now its time to end this herb and end is damn misery and send him to hell/Might as well join him.....Im going there as well/

better overall wordplaying metas and personals
could work on structre with tht even your flowto me was better
better metas

------overall battle vote Theprophet777-----

return the time to my battle in sig

i took the time

peace
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