Ayt dawgs this is the way we guna do this:

Postman- nice verse , good punches and a nice structure 2 it.
Yours was easier 2 read and was more enjoyable.

Hotbars- a lil bit harder 2 read, not enjoyable, punchlines did nt hit hard enough and strutructure was good!!

overall- postman, hotbars u will elevate orver time!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102670

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102455

i took the time 2 vote on urs honestly now do the same 4 me!