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Quoted From Rapper_Bigga
You battling me you must be soft, soft as candy (candy floss)
When it comes to your virginity, it’s a good job you right hand comes in handy//
Cause you ya bitch you’d still be fresh fish
We all know, cocks and little balls are ya best dish//
You purposing a battle to me says
I need to pick up on wins cause I’m even attracting, non-emcee gays//
Meta you’re claiming you have xplizit phlowz
But really the only flow you get is cumin in men’s mouths and biting pillows//
I’m like the k.k.k. But I hate bitches
After I beat you, your gonna be left with over a thousand stitches
You must have crabs, cause when I look at you your pussy itches//
Or are ya nervous you’ve stepped up to bigga, well back down
I’ll have appreciation of handing you the wack crown//
Put the crack down, don’t over-dose now
The abuse is nearly over, this battle bein close HOW//
I’m gonna use you as a punch bag you fat cunt
Roll up a blunt, cause this bitch can’t stunt//
Your punches wont land, you lyrics haven’t worked
Now bigga gonna leave you MERKED//
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Weak punches
Alot of played lines
No personals...
Wordplay...not really
Overall.......9/20
Quote:
Quoted From MetaPhysik
Slapping wrists in basketball like you believe in foul play//
Go away, like your in debt wit the devil, there'll hell to pay//
Like fat girls on bicycle fronts, more than you can handle//
Gossip like scandal, ya hot headed for disaster like candles//
Like your a selfish pot smoker the way you never pass L's//
Big smells, your confused wit eggs like shocked wit shells//
Biggas life is short lived like babies dieing on birth, direct impact//
Split ya wig like subtract, hole in the brain like ya heads cracked//
Leave Big "nearly dead" like neighbors at war, your not hardcore//
Stretched bars need exercise to get in shape weak punches are yours//
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Straight verse..
Decent punches
Flow was pretty good
Wordplay was lacked
Personal were decent
Overal....12/20
Vote-MetaPhysiks
He simply came harder
With punches...
Advice
Metaphysiks: Dont put spaces inbetween ya barz!
It looks stupid as hell...
Rapper_Bigga: Get better structure.. and come harder with punches
Flow was ok... But ya shit needs work
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