Words have left the page, letters without envelopes
Ink tears stain my face expressing what the sender wrote
^solid opener, second line was really deep, feelin it

The ink well's dried up and with it my expression
And as I walk past I kick the full bucket of depression
^ I would only use the suffix "sion" when it is very deap, and it was, but I would have put the second line first n the frist line second to express it more

Start of a recession into an introverted dreary mind
The cogs of thought bereft of liquid scribes and grind
^ nice flow to this and exceptional vocab, very deep

To a halt ,sign impatiently waiting for a fountain of fluid
But the floods have run another course Biros druids drew it
^Didn't get it at first, but it is nice, flow was a bit off compared to other lines, but nice


The rest was really your strength in this piece. I lost the flow a little bit in the "ballpoint of stealth" line, but other than that it was really deep n a lot of complexity. The only thing bad I would say is to use more multis w/ the vocab, it would be even deeper. But really go0d drop.

And there ya go....

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