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Old 01-04-04, 11:29 PM   #11
SublimeSpitta
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From: Do-Or-Die BK
IP:

First let me say that it's gonna be a shame when one of you lose your screen name, because both of them are hot to me. But Anywayz... here goes.

Noda Ropes: I was feeling your joint (especially the ancient building blocks joint)... but you didn't rhyme on two separate parts of your verse (dent & them)? and (diss ya & missiles)? I felt like you were reaching a little... but nothing too drastic... just keep elevating.

Guilty In A Sense:
Dope verse... Nice structure, Great flow, Decent Personals (but they could've been more "personal"), Good Punches. Nice Job Altogether Though. Keep Elevatin' Yo.

Vote: Guilty In A Sense
Harder Punches, Weak Personals (but at least he had them) and better flow and structure line for line. Both of y'all need to elevate some, but I was pleasantly surprised by the battle overall.

Can't Poll Vote Anyways... So Y'all Probably Don't Care What I Think.